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Disneyfan789

aka Henry Poole

  • I live in Tucson, Arizona
  • I was born on August 12
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  • "Disney just announced today that Dr Facilier will be in Descendants 3 along with the newest VK and Freddie's sister Celia Facilier."

    If you have an online source, please link it to the article.

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    • Sorry I was just so excited when I heard the news that I forgot to add those.

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  • I write this message to inform you that because of your good and hard work on Disney Wikia, I have made you the Featured User on the home page. Congratulations.

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  • Hi there. I'm Keanny. So you don't like R rated movies, don't you? It's okay. I don't like R rated movies either. I love Disney, movies and video games as you do.

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  • When I say expand I don't mean by just adding more images or more information to the infoboxes. I'm talking about extended written contents. People will want to know who the character is, and an introduction and infobox doesn't say much.

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  • Hey! Thanks for editing my new article. It was just that there are a whole bunch of Pooh direct-to-DVD movies that I accidentally wrote off those three as some of them. 😊

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  • She is not Korean. Some users have a habit of putting up nonsense for a good laugh.

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  • Hi maybe you should worry about the characters that are on the top of your list. Blodger Blopp is my # 1 and maybe if you watched all the episodes you would know where that came from. Episode 27 to be exact. Good day

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  • There is no proof that says Eddie Murphy will voice Potato Head and the user "CartoonMan2008" is "CartoonMan48". These users just like to mess things up, so don't take them seriously.

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  • In Ralph Breaks the Internet: Wreck-It Ralph 2, the broken piece in Sugar Rush is a broken piece not even Felix's hammer can fix!

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  • Sentences

    You've got the idea and it's good you're putting some effort into extending the plot, but some of the sentences you have written are too long and the choice of words are awkward. You add Too many "Ands", "Thats", "Tells", "Thens" and "Names". Most of your sentences are three to four lines long. Not that I'm saying it's a problem, but you do need a moment to catch your breath. Some people read through very fast, and when I do I often lose pace.

    Try reading this at fast pace outloud and you might get what I mean.

    One morning on the Stellosphere at breakfast, Miles asks Stella for two bowls of Orbit O's with Marsberries for him and M.E.R.C. which she does, but then tells Miles that she's out of Marsberries, Miles then decides to pick some from the garden.

    From the way it looks you're trying to include everything that is seen in the episode. When it comes to writing plots for this Wiki you're just writing a short version of the episode not a screenplay. You've seen how I've re written two plots you wrote, and they sound a lot better without all those long sentences and extra information you put in. You can learn from that.

    Sandboxes

    The important thing about writing plots is taking your time. Go through your writing first until it sounds perfect. The best way to do that is to write it in a sanbox before publishing it to the actual articles.

    Infoboxes

    When inserting infoboxes, please try not to leave the code layout looking like a paragraph. At the bottom of every infobox there is a button that reads "[source]" which will take you to the source of the infoboxes and a preview of the code's layout. It's tidier to copy and paste the code.

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